Writing lyrics, Can i make it as an amatuer rapper?

-Im 16 years old(: been writing since i was 11, (Should i go as Syphen for my Alais?) well anyways please provied opinion and feedback, appreciate it



I be the focus/No wait, i be the smart&final

Try to get this near/ I'll tear your heart&spinal

Play the vinyl,/While im speaking in the back

give you a new rush/ when i go and bust a rap



or busta' rhyme/....

with this dirty mind,

gonna conquer,

hip hop must be mine.

So read between the lines.

this is my beginning

On some Charlie sheen sh*t/ mannn im always winnin'lol not bad, but lyrics are only half of rapping, delivery and flow play a big role as well.